Press Releases:  Communicating with the World


by Steven Saus

Press releases are the main way in which your organization (be it a campaign, Democratic Club, church, etc) will communicate with the press.  Luckily, there is a standard format.  Once you have learned that format, writing press releases is merely filling in the blanks.

What do you want to publicize?  Publicize anything important to your group, its members, supporters, or the public.  You can send a press release when you elect officers, start a major program, hold a community gathering or function, or even have a fundraiser.  The more publicity you get - especially when it's of things you've chosen to publicize - the better your group is.

Do make sure that you are sending a timely press release - a press release from an event a month ago is not going to do anyone any good.

PREPARING THE PRESS RELEASE

You'll start with a "hook" - something that makes your press release newsworthy.  Try to make your headline and first paragraph interesting.  Look at other headlines in the newspaper to get an idea of these sorts of things.   Compare:

"The Montgomery County Democrats are having their regular meeting next Thursday.  There will be a speaker, Joe Billy Jim Bob.  He will talk about revitalizing Dayton"

"Joe Billy Jim Bob, an expert on revitalizing cities, will speak about Dayton's obstacles and how to overcome them next Thursday.  The Montgomery County Democrats arranged to have Mr. Bob speak at their regular meeting."

If your headline and first paragraph weren’t interesting, why would they read the rest?

You'll get more of the idea by looking at our sample press releases, but here's a checklist of things:


Include as the last section of your press release a paragraph with the heading "About (your organization's name)." It should contain the basic information about your organization (e.g., its mission, major programs, when it was founded, etc.).  Close with a centered "-30-" or "###" on a line by itself.  After that, you may add a line like the following:  "If you'd like more information about this topic, or to schedule an interview with Joe Billy Jim Bob, please call Dr. Furter at 555/555-1212 or e-mail Frank at drfurter@transylvania.tv"

SENDING YOUR PRESS RELEASE AND FOLLOWTHROUGH

Be sure to send it to the right place: call ahead to find the right person and department, Get their name right, know their telephone extension and e-mail address, and the section of the paper they work for as an editor or reporter.

If you are sending by e-mail, do not send any attachments.  Many media workers use Macs, which may not be able to open your wonderfully formatted Word document.  Send your press release in plaintext.  If you wish to send digital pictures, call first and see what formats they can accept.

Send your release to a specific individual - the assignment editor for TV, or the metro editor for a newspaper - by fax and e-mail.  If it's convenient, also deliver a hard copy by mail.  Try to send your release at least two weeks prior to the event.  If you're not able to get that kind of lead time, make sure to put a note in BOLD at the top of your release that it is "Time-Sensitive:  RUSH TO News Editor".

Follow through is vital.  About thirty minutes to an hour after you fax a release, call to ensure that it's been received.  If you're sending it to TV, though, make sure you don't fax or call within two hours before a newscast.

Remember:  newsrooms are very busy places, so when you speak to a news desk, expect them to be rushed and unable to give your call thier full attention. Don't take it personally. Just be patient, pleasant and persistent. If you call at a bad time, ask when would be a good time to call back.  If you have a cell phone, give the assignment editor that number, so they could reach you if they need to do so.

FOLLOWUP

Every now and then, it is nice to send a thank-you letter to the editor who places your press releases in the paper. Send a brief note of thanks, and relate any positive feedback you've gotten from the exposure, such as increased inquiries, new members, good attendance at certain events, or donations. The size of your organization and its members, supporters, and fundraisers, will grow and progress in proportion to your ability to "get the word out."

There are some special notes for different types of media.

NEWSPAPER

Send your information early - at least 2 weeks prior to the event.

Know the paper: you can help yourself by knowing how the paper is sectioned and organized.  Is your event entertainment related?  It might fit in the Life section.  Is it a very local activity might fit in the Neighbors section, or a large county event that would make more sense in Local?

For print, it's always a good idea to phone the editor again the morning of the event.  Tell them you're checking to make sure they know about the story.  If they don't, you tell them about it and offer to fax them the information. If they already know about it, ask what you can do to make it easier for them to cover your event, or if there's any questions you can answer.

If you don't succeed try, try again. Don't get discouraged if your event doesn't make the paper the first time or even the second time. Daily news happenings can always change the space allowed for other news. Next time, your event might make it.

Think visually and make sure to highlight photo opportunities.  They may want to take a picture, so make sure you have a visual opportunity for them.

Newspapers cannot use still pictures from your family album, Home video, Slides

RADIO

Because radio has to help listeners visualize events, they pay close attention to the following four questions.  The more questions you can answer "Yes", the better your chances of getting on the radio:  Is it TIMELY? Is it LOCAL?  Does it affect a LARGE NUMBER of people? Does it have EMOTIONAL impact?

Remember that radio exclusively relies on sound.  They use interviews, music and sound effects to help the listeners visualize the event.  They primarily use digital recordings or CDs, and cannot use audio from home audio/video recorders or reel-to-reel tape.  Few stations can handle audiocassettes, and none can handle audio recorded over a phone, unless it's a phone interview.

TV

It's absolutely vital you direct your release appropriately here:  For a story, news tip or event, contact the assignment desk, but for a public service announcement or help on a community project, contact the public service director.

Make sure your event has a visual element. Make sure your visual element is present - at a fundraiser for a candidate, make sure the candidate's there!  Add in a contact list of qualified people from your organization who can talk "on camera" about the event. 

Optimum TV times to send releases are 7am - 10am weekday mornings. 10am is usually the best bet for your confirmation-of-receipt call, and then use the opportunity to "pitch" your story. Ask who the assignment editor is for the day of your event. If it is someone different than the person you directed your release to, then the next day, send the same release to that individual.

If you wish to hold a press conference, give plenty of notice! While newsrooms cover "spur of the moment" press conferences all the time, it is very difficult on the station.  They would like 24 hours notice so we can plan resources if they choose to cover the press conference.  If you want tv cameras to attend, don't hold a press conference when news is on the air:  the cameras are busy doing live stories at that time!  The best times for press conferences are: 9am - 11am, 1pm - 3pm, and 7pm - 9pm.  The worst times for press conferences are 11am- 2:30pm and 4pm-6:30pm.

Television shoots their own video, They cannot use your home video, slides, Super 8 film, cassette tapes, or still pictures.

Conclusion/Examples:

Don’t be afraid to send a press release – even if you know another group has sent one about the same event, send your own!  If a media outlet gets press releases from multiple groups about the same event, they’re more likely to decide that it’s worth covering.

There are two examples.  They’re both the same text (and somewhat true – details have been changed for the sake of the organization), but the second one has callout balloons detailing the parts of the press release. 
See the example Press Release (HTML)
See this Press Release with all the parts marked (126kb JPG)

References

"How to Publicize your Scouts" by Weindel, Vangrov, and Rollins, Feb 2004 handout
"Press Release Primer" by Steve Wolcott, Jan 2004 handout
“Press Releases - How to Write a Great Press Release”, http://www.publicityinsider.com/release.asp, Feb 2004
”Five "Musts" for a Great Press Release”, http://www.writing911.com/7easysteps/s302prtips.htm, Feb 2004
”How To Write an Effective Press Release”, http://www.lunareclipse.net/pressrelease.htm, Feb 2004
”The Anatomy of a Press Release”, Judith Prebyl, http://www.ssdesign.com/librarypr/content/f4pr.shtml, Feb 2004
“Untitled”, http://me.essortment.com/pressreleases_rvss.htm, Feb 2004
”Untitled”, http://www.howipromotemywebsite.com/how-to-write-a-press-release.html, Feb 2004


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